This fan fiction is set a beginning of the day between Ichigo and Rukia. Rukia wants Ichigo to wake up and go to school but Ichigo doens't want to so the episode starts from fighting between them and finishes happy ending.
I like how the writer describe the fighting scene. It is detailed and the dialog makes me imagine how they fight clearly. The development goes on smoothly and easy to understand.
This Fan Fiction is focused on viewpoint of shelock's mother that shows normal conversation between a little Shelock with illness and his mother. It describes how Shelock was in childhood.
The interesting point that I feel freshness is Shelock spends normal childhood. In the original Shelock is flake, cold and flunt person but this fan fic shows a little shelock who can act irritated to mother as normal child. The personality of shelock is totally different compared with the original that I feel.
This fan fiction is not owned the original story of anime/manga series GTO (Great Teacher Onizuka). Onizuka is just blacked out by new student during the class time, Ms. Fuyutsuki is kidnapped by Onizuka's motorbike Kawasaki Z750RS Z2 which new student is stolen.
Not much to say about this fan fic because it looks unfinished. However, the conversation between each characters is written good enough and describes the feature of characters is used the original very well.
This scenario is involved the movie '2012', written from 5months after massiv disaster. People who stay in the Noah's ark, think about rebuilding the world and shows confliction each other about how they are going to live.
This story gives a hint what people have to do after the disaster has been occured which means the writer surely knows the original scenario very well. Nice expressed that the survivor feels disappointment, frustration and highly-elated each person by conversation.
The winner of Suzuran war is Takiya Genji and GPS between Tamao's corps and Takiya tried to fight with Lindamann for the real captain of Suzuran but he lost everytime. Finally, he requested to Tamao to fight again because he thought that the war totally effected by GPS, not only him so he faught with Tamao again.
This piece is not quiet long, even if this is actional fan fiction, it is already I expected mostly and conclusion is unclear. Everything is expectable conversations so I feel no tension about it. However, the conversation is realistic and it covers lack of description. Therefore, what I would suggest to writer that needs to be new character and it would be freshness.
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